Thursday 13 October 2011

Wasted

The wasted night, The wasted day
That wasted sight
Her wasted fate
Wasted was the hate
Love a better industry?
Duh! Then Death be it
For after that
Nothing awaits
Only a wait
To again be one
One with fate.


26 comments:

  1. This work ain't wasted at all though. Last two lines killed it again! :D

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  2. hauntingly beautiful!!!good job..:-)

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  3. so, i read all your poems. well not all, but most on the first page. why are they all so morose?

    for once, try killing instead of dying. :)

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  4. Raj: I am glad you went through them! And, suggestion taken! I shall try :)

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  5. This is love. Like really.

    xx
    http://musingsofjustanothergirl.blogspot.com/

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  6. Update update update sooon. :D
    Plus, you changed the picture and I got random love for the name of this blog. :)

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  7. Poulomi: Thanks candy :)
    Ayushi: Yes, very soon! and do keep disseminating the love across here ;) :*

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  8. ah, to be at peace with our destiny. terrific.

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  9. Believe me, that only helps! Cribbing is humane, but as much as we can, acceptance is the virtue that we must imbibe! It brings peace!

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  10. Goes without saying! How awesome it is to see all the commentators here are blog frands :D
    I shall. Next post, I advertise Gossamer diaries. ;)
    :*
    Now updateeeeeeee, woman.

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  11. Awiie! Too kind re! and yes, the update is due :D
    mmwah!

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  12. The advertising of Gossamer Diaries was successful, Aayushi! :) Is it one 'a' because I think I've been using two oops! :D

    Hello Priyanka ~ nice to meet you :) I've been reading through your poetry and your writing is good! Especially loved this one :)

    Best Wishes,
    Fiona

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  13. Hi Fiona!
    Pleased to have you here! I am glad you went through them :)
    Thanks a lot!

    Much love!

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  14. And yes, that's a single 'a' :D

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  15. I read this post and the first words that came through my mind were' hauntingly beautiful' and I looked forward to comment, but my mind was read even before I thought of it :P the words might be taken but this was awesome :)

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  16. Nailed it... Few words speak volumes. Here's the proof! :)

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  17. oi. wasting away nights it the pursuit of wasting words are we? :)

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