Thursday, October 13, 2011

Wasted

The wasted night, The wasted day
That wasted sight
Her wasted fate
Wasted was the hate
Love a better industry?
Duh! Then Death be it
For after that
Nothing awaits
Only a wait
To again be one
One with fate.

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25 comments:

  1. CяystalOctober 13, 2011 at 10:53 AM

    This work ain't wasted at all though. Last two lines killed it again! :D

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  2. GossamerDiariesOctober 13, 2011 at 12:06 PM

    Thanks honey :)

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  3. Gaurav DwivediOctober 15, 2011 at 12:45 AM

    Nice ..really Nice

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  4. GossamerDiariesOctober 18, 2011 at 11:06 PM

    Thanks Gaurav :)

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  5. RahulOctober 19, 2011 at 8:26 PM

    hauntingly beautiful!!!good job..:-)

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  6. GossamerDiariesOctober 19, 2011 at 9:22 PM

    Thanks, Rahul! :)

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  7. RajOctober 19, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    you, can go darker.

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  8. RajOctober 19, 2011 at 11:03 PM

    so, i read all your poems. well not all, but most on the first page. why are they all so morose?

    for once, try killing instead of dying. :)

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  9. GossamerDiariesOctober 20, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    Raj: I am glad you went through them! And, suggestion taken! I shall try :)

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  10. PoulomiOctober 20, 2011 at 1:57 AM

    This is love. Like really.

    xx
    http://musingsofjustanothergirl.blogspot.com/

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  11. CяystalOctober 20, 2011 at 9:44 PM

    Update update update sooon. :D
    Plus, you changed the picture and I got random love for the name of this blog. :)

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  12. GossamerDiariesOctober 20, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    Poulomi: Thanks candy :)
    Ayushi: Yes, very soon! and do keep disseminating the love across here ;) :*

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  13. GossamerDiariesOctober 21, 2011 at 10:14 PM

    Thanks Zeba! :)

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  14. Ed PilollaOctober 22, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    ah, to be at peace with our destiny. terrific.

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  15. GossamerDiariesOctober 22, 2011 at 2:45 AM

    Believe me, that only helps! Cribbing is humane, but as much as we can, acceptance is the virtue that we must imbibe! It brings peace!

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  16. CяystalOctober 22, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    Goes without saying! How awesome it is to see all the commentators here are blog frands :D
    I shall. Next post, I advertise Gossamer diaries. ;)
    :*
    Now updateeeeeeee, woman.

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  17. GossamerDiariesOctober 22, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    Awiie! Too kind re! and yes, the update is due :D
    mmwah!

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  18. --October 23, 2011 at 9:08 AM

    The advertising of Gossamer Diaries was successful, Aayushi! :) Is it one 'a' because I think I've been using two oops! :D

    Hello Priyanka ~ nice to meet you :) I've been reading through your poetry and your writing is good! Especially loved this one :)

    Best Wishes,
    Fiona

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  19. GossamerDiariesOctober 23, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    Hi Fiona!
    Pleased to have you here! I am glad you went through them :)
    Thanks a lot!

    Much love!

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  20. GossamerDiariesOctober 23, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    And yes, that's a single 'a' :D

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  21. AyushiOctober 23, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    I read this post and the first words that came through my mind were' hauntingly beautiful' and I looked forward to comment, but my mind was read even before I thought of it :P the words might be taken but this was awesome :)

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  22. GossamerDiariesOctober 23, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    Serendipity: Thanks a lot! :)

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  23. Neha ChoudhryNovember 11, 2011 at 11:11 PM

    Nailed it... Few words speak volumes. Here's the proof! :)

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  24. GossamerDiariesNovember 12, 2011 at 1:09 PM

    Thanks love :* :)

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  25. RajAugust 1, 2012 at 4:37 AM

    oi. wasting away nights it the pursuit of wasting words are we? :)

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