Today as I sat and told her
Don’t cry honey that is how things move
She wept and wept and wept
I told her, to tell him
Love is all you need
She wept and wept and wept
I told her, you got to understand
Don’t let love go
She wept and wept and wept
I told her, he loves you
He isn’t possessive but watchful
She wept and wept and wept
She said, what do you know about love
You failed in your own quest
I looked at her as eyes brimmed
She picked up her bag and left
Gravity didn’t retire to idleness
Tears she pulled with all duress
As I wept and wept and wept.
Aww :(
ReplyDeleteShe'll find someone who won't give her tears, at all.
This was poignant.
The last three lines- <3
Great work once again..:)
ReplyDeletePriyanka this is so eloquent! It was so quick and it did what it had to. It connects very well. :)
ReplyDeleteYou know I am your fan. You know, you know, you know. Don't you!?
ReplyDeleteAs Cяystal said, Poignant!
Your poems touch the heart in a very strange way. Love what you write! :*
Also, the new DP is, well, umm.. okay! if I were guy I would've proposed you. You're a beautiful person, in and out!
ReplyDeleteCrystal : She must :) *hugs*
ReplyDeleteThanks love!
Niharika : Thanks a lot dear! :)
Greeshma : Thanks honey! :)
Anuranjani : I couldn't have smiled any wider :D Thanks a lot re! Love you, Mmwah mwah!
there was something about this. always is. somethings that rings in your ears long after you have read it.
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i am honestly considering anuranjani's advice :P
Raj: Thanks a lot re! And aha, someone is trying to get cheesy in here :P :)
ReplyDeletenaah not trying really. its just something that happens to me around women i admire :P
ReplyDeletenow what i cant decide is how good or bad it is. :/