Friday 25 November 2011

As I say Goodbye.


As I say goodbye to the hand that held
The falling me, the lost myself
As I say goodbye to eyes that promised
Of love, of friendship, of feelings unmatched




As I say goodbye to the kiss unlived
No matter how much I suppressed the yearning self




As I say goodbye to the laugh that echoes
In the ballroom of my heart, where a certain feelings danced



As I say goodbye to the promises unspoken,
As I say goodbye to the affinity down trodden
As I say goodbye to the arms unwrapped,
As I say goodbye to something I never had



My heart sinks
I stand with a batted breath
To witness the impending
To watch you walk ahead
And how I still will never regret
For something unparalleled we sure shared
Something premium not molested and raped
With the flood of expectations
But fostered with a clasp of love innate




These few days will remain etched in my head
When you only gave, expecting nothing
Your memories will span distances and times
As I will pull of a smile to the world and amidst
My heart will never cease to sink.


16 comments:

  1. Priyankaaaaaaa! This is beautiful! What an amazing thing to wake up to. :) You made my day shine a little extra brighter! :) LOVE! <3

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  2. Ditto Greeshma.
    This made such a connection.
    You.freaking.magician. :*

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  3. Its amazing as always...

    Your words touch thousand hearts.

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  4. Greeshma, Aayushi, Juhi : Thanks a lot girlies! Mwah mwah! You guys never cease to encouragement me and believe me that is what keeps me going! Be there you guys, mmmwahh! Lots of love :)

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  5. Priyanka: Love love love! :*
    Aayushi:I know right? She's awesome! :)

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  6. WoW! This is the most beautiful piece of writing I've read from you, Priyanka! Absolutely LOVED every line! :)

    P.S. ~ Great images too!

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  7. //As I say goodbye to the laugh that echoes
    In the ballroom of my heart, where a certain feelings danced
    U re one brilliant poet.Brilliant.Each of ur poems.Simple language.Clear flow of thoughts.Little ambiguity.Terrifically meaningful.You should seriously think about getting your stuff published.I don't come across awesome poetesses like you everywhere....

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  8. Written Beautifully But another That Sad sad Thing all Over again?
    Let Me Meet up, Somebody's Gonna Get a Hurt Real Bad.

    P.S. you Better Have started Editing that thing and Submitted it yet. And Talk To me soon.

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  9. Lady Fiona: Thanks so much! I am glad you liked it, I really spent my heart and head religiously on this one! :) :)

    Rahul: This comment has encouraged me and brought a smile, ever so wide :) :) Thanks so much re! I just hope I am someday able to materialize what you just said :)

    Favourite boy: This wasn't really sad but unlived, darling! :) And bas, exams just got over, and about that, we will talk over the call :)

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  10. m spellbound by ur flabergasting lines ... I fail to undrstand how difficult might b fr u 2 undergo random emotions , while writing such a lovely poem .. supplementin pics wer equally good ... way to go !!

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  11. Get all your poems published! Each one of 'em is freakin' awesome!

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  12. how on earth do you write something amazing, all the time?? :o and leave us all no choice but to deeply adore?:)

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  13. Rimesh: Thanks so much! And yes, i am very often taken over by the characters or the themes but i am nonetheless overwhelmed :)

    Kritika: That's so sweet of you! How i wish I could :)

    Brinda: *Wide Smile* I am glad i am able to deliver something worth adoration :) :) Thank you so much!!

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  14. I've been away for a while and I see I was missing something! This poem is so beautiful.
    How many times have I told you, you are absolutely awesome.
    Loved, loved, Loved the poem.
    Loads of love! :*

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  15. Thanks darling! Mwah mwah mwah :D

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